Vassar Critical Journal

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By Gelsey White

Although they were born thirty years apart in different countries, Langston Hughes and Derek Walcott both wrote through  the racial and cultural history of the transatlantic experience. This  transatlantic experience unifies Hughes’ American landscape and  Walcott’s Caribbean seascape through the history of Africa and its  descendants. Through their poetry, both Hughes and Walcott reclaim  places of cultural significance from the dominating white male  narrative of history to document sites of trauma and realign them with  the agency of non-white peoples. While Walcott focuses on the  Caribbean Sea and Hughes on rivers in the American landscape, both  poets incorporate transatlantic movement and the power of waterscapes to hold, submerge, or let resurface the history of African  oppression. While the bodies of water presented in their poetry  function mainly as recreations of history, they also function as sites of  agency and hope for the descendants living in the wake of these waterscapes.  

Walcott and Hughes, in their respective texts, use waterscapes  that function as both sites of cultural significance and narrative  frames. While waterways have no official political ownership, white,  imperial powers have traditionally used rivers and oceans as a means  of transportation and destruction of non-white bodies through the transatlantic movement of people. The cultural significance of a place,  in this context, refers to the way in which a location produces  meaning for a group of people by providing a literal site for social,  political, or historical memory to live on past an event. By marking  the cultural significance of a place, members of a social group  recognize the shared experiences that unify people of a certain  identity. W. Jason Miller notes that white artists have claimed  ownership over the natural world and occupied it for their literary use:  “White American riverscapes are often considered the domain of  white male heterosexuals, and certainly had this reputation during  Hughes’s lifetime” (24). For Walcott and Hughes to write about  waterways is to both acknowledge their view of these spaces as sites  of trauma, history, and remembrance, as well as to complicate the  meaning of these sites through metaphoric representation. It is no  coincidence that Walcott and Hughes use the sea and the river,  respectively, to subvert the traditional expectations of nature in  poetry; for both men, these places were and are real, and transfixing  them in poetry allows them to create cultural significance in art where  it already exists beneath dominant narratives of reality. Through their  poetry, Hughes and Walcott establish the shared experiences  associated with rivers and the sea by using these waterscapes as  places that both exist and influence their poetic narratives.  

Walcott, of African and white descent born on Saint Lucia,  and Hughes, an African American born in Missouri, wrote poetry  which worked through the histories of their ancestry, blending the  past with the present and future. For Walcott, the Caribbean Sea  functions as a site of memory that combines his multiple racial lineages. According to Ben Thomas Jefferson, “the history contained  within the “oceanic past” complicates the poet’s European lineage and  emphasizes his Afro-Caribbean roots” (296). Walcott mixes these two  heritages within his poem “The Sea is History” to highlight how the  sea is at once fluid and permanent, a site that upholds cultural history  throughout time. Unlike teleological history, which distinguishes  events in the past through a progressive narrative, cultural history in  this context unifies disparate events through associations established  in artistic and material recreations of the past by a social group.  Walcott begins the poem by asking “where are your monuments, your  battles, martyrs? / Where is your tribal memory?” (1-2). While  Walcott may be speaking to the people who have a “dominant  relationship” to the Caribbean, he does not specify whose history the  sea can or does stand in for and uses the unspecific second person  “you,” suggesting that the sea can simultaneously hold multiple  histories. In these first two lines, Walcott connects a Eurocentric view  of history, which records history through monuments, battles, and  martyrs, with a Caribbean view, tracing memory through tribal  ancestry. Both records of the past, according to Walcott, are held  within the sea; “in that grey vault. The sea. The sea / has locked them  up. The sea is History” (3-4). Not only does the sea hold history,  according to Walcott, but it traps it, a metaphorical reference to the  transatlantic slave experience. By unifying different perspectives  through the sea, Walcott develops this place to function in his poetry  on multiple thematic levels.  

In “The Negro Speaks of Rivers,” Hughes uses the river as a  way of connecting multiple moments in the histories that are part of his ancestry. Hughes references different rivers in the Middle East,  Africa, and America, “I bathed in the Euphrates when dawns were  young…” unifying these separate lands through the image of a  constant river (4). According to Miller, Hughes finds historical  significance for himself in these rivers as a way of combating the  threat of the American landscape for African Americans: “By  claiming intimacy with the world’s historical rivers, however, he  lessens this fearfulness” (24). Hughes seeks a commonality between  the experiences with these rivers, unlike Walcott who layers multiple  experiences onto a single sea and highlights the human relationship to  the river as place. “I bathed…I built…I looked upon the Nile and  raised the pyramids above it…” (4-6). Hughes includes physical  actions, driven by the first-person narrator, to challenge the idea of  how humans interact with the river. In “The Negro Speaks of Rivers,”  the narrator is vicariously acting in these historical moments by  relating to the imagery of a river, which is “older than the flow of  human blood” to physical interactions with the rivers of time (2).

Both Walcott and Hughes combine the metaphorical and literal throughout their poetry to acknowledge the black and  Caribbean people who lost their lives within these spaces of the sea  and the river. Walcott’s biblical references in “The Sea is History”  serve not only to unify the pre- and post-colonial experiences of  Caribbean people but also to use the Christian tradition to make sense  of the colonial experience: 

Then there were the packed cries,

the shit, the moaning: 

Exodus. 

Bone soldered by coral to bone, 

Mosaics 

mantled by the benediction of the shark’s shadow, 

that was the Ark of the Covenant. (10-16) 

The exodus to which Walcott refers is the slave trade, the physical  movement of bodies across the Atlantic. The Ark of the Covenant,  which contains the Ten Commandments, is, according to Walcott, the  reef beneath the sea which he imagines built with the bones of slaves.  According to Jefferson, “By affixing the skeletal corpses of Africans  who did not make it across the Middle Passage onto the ocean floor,  Walcott turns the whole Atlantic into a kind of necropolis…a place of  memory” (298). By occupying and transforming the religious  tradition into the physical experience of slaves, Walcott reclaims the  sea as a site for historical trauma as opposed to economic profit, while  also acknowledging the literal bodies that exist beneath the waves. 

For Hughes, rivers also act as sites that unify both metaphorical representations of suffering and the material bodies of  those who have died as a result of white oppression. In “The Bitter  River,” Hughes imagines that the river has a metaphorical power as well as a physical power to drown someone: “There is a bitter river/  Flowing through the South. / Too long has the taste of its water/ Been  in my mouth” (1-4). The bitter river stands in for oppression, which  sours all the experiences of the narrator by constantly influencing his  physical senses. The narrator is not literally consuming the bitter river  water, but the oppression he experiences every day functions like the  river. Just as the sea contains the reefs constructed of bone in “The  Sea is History,” the river in “The Bitter River” is “mixed with the  blood of the lynched boys” (11). As Miller notes, Hughes’ autobiographical experiences with rivers suggest that he viewed rivers  as a site of cultural importance in relation to race (25). Hughes wrote  this poem for two boys who were lynched, and the bitter river  contains the history of murdered African Americans both literally and  metaphorically.  

Waterscapes occupy both the physical body and the mind of  the characters in the poetry of Walcott and Hughes. As Jefferson  notes about the character Shabine in Walcott’s poem “The Schooner  Flight,” “one could argue that the sea has become an integral part of  [Shabine’s] body” (291). Rather than Shabine reflecting aspects of the  ocean, however, the ocean forces its way into his body, challenging  the character instead of providing insight into him. In “The Schooner  Flight,” Shabine imagines himself consumed and drowned by the  ocean in the same way the ghosts he encountered earlier in the poem were:  

I remember them ghost ships, I saw me corkscrewing 

to the sea-bed of sea-worms, fathom pass fathom 

my jaw clenched like a fist, and only one thing 

hold me, trembling, how my family home safe. (396-399) 

By referring to the ghost ships earlier in the poem, the narrator Shabine places himself within the historical context of humans’  relationship to the sea. For Shabine, the sea does not become a way to  understand his current self, but rather his past; as he points out, the  only thing that holds him steady, that keeps him from drowning in the  sea, is the thought of his family on land. For Shabine, water occupies  his thoughts in the form of fears, which gestures back to Hughes’  connection with the river as a site of fear.  

Waterscapes contain cultural memories which continue the  historical consciousness of characters within both Walcott’s and  Hughes’ poetry. While Shabine in “The Schooner Flight” distresses  over the threat of the sea, the narrator in Hughes’ “The Negro Speaks  of Rivers” finds power in the historical prevalence of the river. His  mantra, “my soul has grown deep like the rivers” suggests that he  finds a sense of spiritual understanding in the river (4, 10). The  history which the narrator references, of people bathing, living, and  working beside rivers, suggests a symbiosis which exists between the  narrator, a self-proclaimed negro, and the rivers of history. In this  poem, the narrator understands his soul through the river, finding a  sense of life instead of a foreboding death.  

While the river and the sea provide mechanisms for the poets  to make sense of their narrators, it is less through a physical sense of  self and more through the language of the water. Jefferson notes that  “Walcott’s poetry is not only created in the sea, it is also created of  the sea” (291). The “sea voice” which Jefferson imagines is part of a  larger cultural relationship with the sea which comes from Walcott’s  life around the sea and the importance it plays in the identity of his  poetry (291). While Jefferson suggests that the sea becomes a part of  Shabine’s body in “The Schooner Flight,” as he “couldn’t shake the  sea noise out of [his] head,” this line rather demonstrates that the sea  is an internal language (112). The language of the sea or the river  carries symbolic meaning for both Walcott and Hughes, as James de  Jongh, referenced in Miller, notes that in Hughes’ poetry there is  “symbolic relevance of being sold ‘downriver,’ finding comfort at  ‘the riverside,’ and longing for the freedom found ‘over Jordan’” (Miller 25). By using the language of these water sources as a  universal experience, either through a historical or cultural understanding, the poets transform the river or the sea into significant  literary sources of knowledge for their narrators and the communities  they situate in relation to the waterscapes.  

The language of rivers and seas embeds a source of cultural  knowledge into the poetry of Hughes and Walcott because places are  formed through both oral and literary understandings of a certain  space. Seamus Heaney’s sense of place, referenced by Jefferson,  includes the vital aspects of inherited oral culture and literary culture  which create a sense of a place through the “equable marriage  between the geographical country and the country of the mind,  whether the country of the mind takes its tone unconsciously from a  shared oral inherited culture, or from a consciously savoured literary  culture, or from both” (288). In his poetry, Hughes instills the oral  inherited culture of their communities by using music as an oral  language. The blues influences the poetry of both Walcott and  Hughes, as the blues have “[come] into form as a result of a series of  intersecting experiences (slavery, resistance to enslavement, and the  post-slavery experience), [they] have emerged as poignant early 20th  century articulations of black life and struggle” (Thomas 26). Just as  the blues developed as an oral culture to discuss these issues, the  thematic use of the river and the sea also have taken part in forming  both an oral and written culture of black experience. Hughes, in  “Sylvester’s Dying Bed,” for example, uses blues features of  repetitious syncopation, rhyming, and regional vernacular to discuss  the relationship between the life of Sylvester and the River Jordan:  

But I felt ma time’s a-comin’,  

And I know’d I’s dyin’ fast.  

I seed de River Jerden  

A-creepin’ muddy past- (17-20) 

Hughes presents the river as a measurement of time through a  written voice that implies speech. In these lines, the river not only  represents a past time in history but also the present time as it moves  past, like the flow of a river. In this poem, Hughes combines the  image of the river with the experiences of the black community  through vocalization in blues aesthetic. Hughes’ poems rely on  language, not only through written language but also through the  vocalization of trauma and experience which the blues provided to  African Americans. He has his narrator “speak” of rivers, not write of  them, in “The Negro Speaks of Rivers.” As Miller notes, “speaking is  central to how truth is remembered” (30). Just as Hughes’ poems  function as sites of remembrance of a cultural past, the rivers function  as metaphorical places for the reclamation of narratives through oral  language such as the blues.  

While Walcott does use the blues as a way of commenting on  the social conditions of “black America” (Thomas 24), he connects  the sea with the oral culture of the sea chantey because the chantey  functions as a shared cultural experience unique to the nautical world.  Walcott’s rich use of blues makes a thorough discussion of this topic  beyond the scope of this paper, however it is worth noting that  Walcott often uses the blues to articulate the experiences of the  African diaspora community (Thomas 23-27). The blues function as a  source of oral culture in Walcott’s poetry through a “West Indian  appropriation of the blues to communicate the phenomenon of black male belonging in the US” (Thomas 23), but Walcott’s primary focus  on language in relation to the sea is through the inherited culture of  the sea chantey. According to Jefferson, “the chantey is produced  from an experience of the sea, and this experience reflects upon how  the sea is known” (293). In “A Sea Chantey,” for example, Walcott  uses “the sea’s liquid letters” (26) to describe the names of the islands  in the Caribbean, suggesting that the sea has a language which  influences not only those who live in proximity to the sea, but also the  songs, or chanteys, which in turn make sense of the sea. The story that  Shabine tells in “The Schooner Flight” is a nautical chantey, as the  poem represents “Shabine [singing] to you from the depths of the sea”  (472). By tying the experience of Shabine, a self-proclaimed “red  nigga who love the sea” to the act of vocalizing his experiences  through song, Walcott demonstrates how a language produced by the  sea then reflects upon the production of the sea in his poetry as a  place of oppression as well as reclaimed history (40).  

Both Hughes and Walcott use the power of speaking and writing about the historical experiences of the African diaspora  through waterscapes to create a form of agency in spite of oppression.  By invoking agency, the ability of an individual to make decisions  without constraints from larger societal structures, the poets suggest  that their artistic work provides a space to escape hegemonic  restraints. The sea and the river both function as sites of cultural  trauma, the sea holding the bodies of murdered slaves and the river  holding the bodies of lynched African Americans both metaphorically  and literally. By using these waterscapes as sites not only of death but  also of rebirth and agency, the poets transform their cultural perspectives on these places. In “Life is Fine,” the narrator jumps into  a river and sinks, but fails to die and later proclaims his affinity for  life: 

I went down to the river 

I set down on the bank 

I tried to think but couldn’t, 

So I jumped in and sank… 

You may hear me holler, 

You may see me cry, 

But I’ll be dogged, sweet baby,  

If you gonna see me die. (1-4, 23-26) 

By claiming the experience of drowning as a decision for this  narrator, one that he ultimately chooses to avoid in favor of life,  Hughes transforms the site of the river into a place acted upon instead  of imposed. The river, instead of drowning the narrator, appears to  give him a new perspective on life, therefore restoring his agency. In  “Lament Over Love,” Hughes presents the river as a place for his  narrator to work through her emotions in the present, rather than a  place to be tied to because of historical significance: 

I’m goin’ down to de river 

An’ I ain’t goin’ there to swim. 

Goin’ down to de river, 

Ain’t goin’ there to swim. 

Ma true love’s left me, an’ 

I’m goin’ there to think about him. (7-12) 

By repeating the first two lines, Hughes emphasizes that the  river is not only a site for physical interaction with the water, but also  for more introspective actions. By making both “Lament Over Love”  and “Life is Fine” highly individual experiences, using the first person and emphasizing personal decision and agency, Hughes reclaims the  river as a site of personal transformation.  

While Hughes wrote “The Negro Speaks of Rivers” with the  understanding that the river “has as much cultural significance as a  site of oppression in [the year the poem was written] as it did during  times of slavery,” he does not use the river to portray experiences of  suffering but rather to demonstrate how rivers allowed his ancestors  to survive and thrive (Miller 31). Miller argues that “The Negro  Speaks of Rivers” uses historical memory to overcome the relationship between African Americans and the American river  created through white lynching: 

The poem reminds others that despite the mob tendency to lynch victims from bridges which cross America’s rivers, historical and personal memories of waterscapes have become  essential to overcoming the psychological trauma of imagining  bodies becoming the subject of sadistic souvenir seeking. (31) 

In “The Negro Speaks of Rivers,” the historical references that  the narrator places himself in culminate in Abe Lincoln’s trip to  Mississippi, which sparked the decision to end slavery. Hughes  highlights this historical milestone by describing the physical  transformation of the river from a site of lynching, murder, and  darkness that he portrays in “The Bitter River” into a place of beauty:  “I’ve seen its muddy bosom turn all golden in the sunset” (8-9).  Hughes uses the river as a thread which ties together different  historical moments of survival and reclamation of the self to  transform the river into a symbol of life for the African American  community.

Walcott uses the sea to give voice to the people of the Caribbean, and working through his own historical traumas allows his  characters to sail past these experiences and survive the sea.  According to Jefferson, “Walcott suggests that, as the places of  history, aquatic bodies may also be the site of healing” (301). In “The Schooner Flight,” Walcott’s protagonist Shabine discovers from his  perils on the sea a newfound sense of power previously reserved for foreign colonials: 

Well, Shabine has bridled the horses of the sea; you see me watching the sun till my eyeballs seared, so all you mad people feel Shabine crazy, but all you ain’t know my strength, hear? The coconuts standing by in their regiments in yellow khaki, they waiting for Shabine to take over these islands, and all you best dread the day I am healed of being a human. (358-365) 

Walcott uses the Eurocentric reference to Poseidon, the Greek  god of the sea, to describe Shabine’s control of the sea, redesigning  this myth to suit his non-European character. Not only does Shabine  learn how to conquer the sea, but he also imagines a time when he  will be able to lay claim over the islands of the Caribbean previously  colonized by white Europeans. Shabine can only reclaim the land, a  form of reverse colonization, by first being able to control the sea, the  place which facilitates inter-island travel and discovery. Shabine can  imagine a day when he is “healed of being a human,” a day when the  baggage of ancestral influence and the external powers of the natural  world no longer cause him suffering. Walcott presents this image of  the future through Shabine to suggest that African descendants can use the sea, which previously was the site of their oppression, death,  and suffering, to permit cultural healing.  

Finally, it would not be proper to conclude this analysis without examining how Walcott deals with the image of the river in  Omeros. In Book 3, chapter XXV, part II, the character Achilles  hallucinates returning to the Congo River in Africa, where he is  reunited with his father. By having Achilles experience his ancestry  by traveling to a civilization on the river, Walcott appears to use the  same historical power of the river which Hughes uses in “The Negro  Speaks of Rivers.” Achilles does not discover this place, however, he  “remembered this sunburnt river” (1). Just as the narrator in “The  Negro Speaks of Rivers” imagines his life among rivers through  history, Achilles uses vicarious experience to reconnect with the river  of his past. In part III, Achilles discovers his multiple ancestries  through the waterscapes reflected in his father’s features: “He sought  his own features in those of their life-giver,/ and saw two worlds  mirrored there: the hair was surf/ curling round a sea rock, the  forehead a frowning river” (31-33). Walcott’s image of the sea and  the river creating the features of Achilles’ father unifies the function  of these waterscapes together. By referencing time, history, ancestry,  and the ability to give life through the description of the features of  the face, Walcott unites the two worlds of the historical river and the  transatlantic ocean, the pre and post-colonial features of the African  diaspora.  

Through their use of waterscapes to recreate and work through  historical and cultural experiences, Walcott and Hughes imagine new  meanings and functions of the sea and the river for their communities. Both poets make sense of historical traumas by acknowledging the  sea and the river as sites of oppression, and by reclaiming these places  by writing through their legacies. The act of writing poetry, for both  men, was itself a form of agency, which they used to reclaim these  natural waterscapes for their cultural performance. By knowing rivers,  Hughes knows the history of the African American experience, and  by writing of the sea, Walcott transforms it into a place of spiritual  and physical knowledge. Hughes and Walcott use the river and the  sea, these natural forces unified by their power to transport, transform,  and destroy, to return, transfix, and give life to narratives previously  submerged within the depths of cultural existence.  

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Gelsey White ’19 is a senior English major from Taunton, Massachusetts whose interests include literary nonfiction, anthropology, and gender studies. She is a member of VRDT, VARC,  student theater, and Boilerplate Magazine. She can often be found  reading books about mountain climbing, taking photographs, or  dancing.

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